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Arthadan_ |
Posted: Nov 20 2012, 07:12 PM
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Done!
Thanks everybody for their contributions! By the way, I no English native speaker, as you may have noticed already. So, if you notice any grammar mistakes, please tell me so I can correct them. Download (click on "Click here to start download from sendspace"). |
Arthadan_ |
Posted: Nov 22 2012, 05:22 PM
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Not a single comment?
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Robin Smallburrow |
Posted: Nov 22 2012, 11:16 PM
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I'm sorry Arthadan, but some of us have to work during the week! Will have a read and give you a comment over the weekend
I think that you probably already know my views - that I generally like what you have done except for our disagreeing over the Men of Rhovanion culture - anyway will let you know some comments in a few days Robin S. ![]() -------------------- by Robin Smallburrow
TOR documents created by me, you can view and download by clicking these links: Magic in Middle Earth V.2 The Dragon's Ring List of Aids V.2 Fan Supplement V.2 A Kidnapping in Umbar |
Poosticks7 |
Posted: Nov 23 2012, 06:59 AM
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No you misunderstood what I meant. I meant you only had 5 backgrounds the 6th (i.e last) should have the Awareness as a skill. You healer background is fine. -------------------- |
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Robin Smallburrow |
Posted: Nov 23 2012, 07:11 AM
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Arthadan, comments on your PDF - Great stuff by the way!
Introduction: Are you aware of the entry in the Tale of Years in the Appendices of The Lord of the Rings? "c.1400 About this time, owing to dissensions and to the unfriendliness of the lands of Eastern Eriador, some of the Stoors return to Wilderland and dwell beside the river Gladden that flows into the Anduin. They become a riverside people, fishers and users of small boats" Specialities should include Anduin-lore. You have two backgrounds with the Hunting skill as favoured. Was this intentional, or could you write up another with a different favoured skill, eg Stealth or Travel?? Names: Why isn't Deagol & Smeagol in the list?? Otherwise pretty good - can't really comment until a character actually is played! Robin S. ![]() -------------------- by Robin Smallburrow
TOR documents created by me, you can view and download by clicking these links: Magic in Middle Earth V.2 The Dragon's Ring List of Aids V.2 Fan Supplement V.2 A Kidnapping in Umbar |
Arthadan_ |
Posted: Nov 25 2012, 04:56 PM
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Robin Smallburrow, I have added Anduin-lore to the specialities and I think I'll change the hunter backgroung for another which favourite skill will be Awareness or Stealth.
About Smeagol and Deagol names, they're more than one thousand years old! I think they could have a bad reputation and are not used anymore. Maybe even for Anduin Hobbits calling someone "smeagol" means he's someone not to be trusted... Poosticks7, I have six backgrounds, I posted the first one before the other five. But since I'm going to change one of then, I'll think about your suggestion. |
Arthadan_ |
Posted: Dec 5 2012, 08:08 PM
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Poosticks7 |
Posted: Dec 6 2012, 09:08 AM
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Looks good Arthadan, though I can't download it (I don't want to sign up to another file share site).
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Robin Smallburrow |
Posted: Dec 7 2012, 06:33 AM
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Same here Arthadan - when I clicked on your preview copy, I got a completely useless program 'ILivid' when all I wanted was your document, so don't want to sign up for anything now....
Any ideas how to make it available?? Robin S. ![]() -------------------- by Robin Smallburrow
TOR documents created by me, you can view and download by clicking these links: Magic in Middle Earth V.2 The Dragon's Ring List of Aids V.2 Fan Supplement V.2 A Kidnapping in Umbar |
Arthadan_ |
Posted: Dec 10 2012, 03:25 PM
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Here you are! (you have to click on "Click here to start download from sendspace" at the bottom of the page)
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