Zed's Magic Thread

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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Ghorin » Sun Feb 14, 2016 10:35 pm

tomfish wrote: Please send me the french version as well when you're done ! ;)
More seriously, I could help with the translation, depending on how fast you want to go.
Hi Tom,

In fact i'd like to go quite fast as I wish to use it in my first campaign in march. Now even if the document is not very long (still 16 pages ...), the work is not very easy if i want to do a good job (find the right vocabulary and style that may meet the ones Zed, Cubicle 7 team & Tolkien).
For the moment i've only started the first sentences of the first page. The start will be the most difficult as i have to "find" that vocabulary and style, then it should be easier and faster.
You can help if you want. We could share the work, build a common vocabulary and then each one may read and propose correction of what the other wrote.
Another way (if you have not time for the moment) would be that i do full translation and then i send it to you for reading and proposal of corrections & enhancements.
As you prefer.

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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Nikôh » Mon Feb 15, 2016 10:42 am

Salut Ghorin !

Nice to see you here (in addition to Edge forum). And funny to write to you in English ! This just for our English-speaking friends so that they see that TOR is also active in France and other French-speaking countries.

I can also offer some support for proof-reading when you have finished. I unfortunately cannot commit to a full translation. I actually did the proof-reading for Edge Rivendel - Fondcombe sourcebook in French.

You will find me in Edge forum and can write to me from there as well.

A bientôt et bon courage pour la traduction.

Nikôh

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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by tomfish » Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:30 pm

I'm not sure I can commit to deadlines for the moment, so proof-reading is a safer option.
Don't hesitate to send me a private message on this forum or on the french one.
Ghorin wrote: Another way (if you have not time for the moment) would be that i do full translation and then i send it to you for reading and proposal of corrections & enhancements.
As you prefer.
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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Ghorin » Mon Feb 15, 2016 9:42 pm

Nikôh wrote:Salut Ghorin !

Nice to see you here (in addition to Edge forum). And funny to write to you in English ! This just for our English-speaking friends so that they see that TOR is also active in France and other French-speaking countries.

I can also offer some support for proof-reading when you have finished. I unfortunately cannot commit to a full translation. I actually did the proof-reading for Edge Rivendel - Fondcombe sourcebook in French.

You will find me in Edge forum and can write to me from there as well.

A bientôt et bon courage pour la traduction.

Nikôh
Hi Nikôh,

Yep, that's fun to speak in english with another french man ;-)

Concerning the translation, it's starting (5% done) and i'll be very interesting in your proof-reading : as you have done it for Fondcombe (Rivendell) module, then you may give me good comments.

See you soon
tomfish wrote:I'm not sure I can commit to deadlines for the moment, so proof-reading is a safer option.
Don't hesitate to send me a private message on this forum or on the french one.
That's very fine Tom, now i have 2 proof-readers :-)

Ghorin

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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by zedturtle » Tue Feb 16, 2016 2:51 am

Whenever y'all are done, just send me the final text back, s'il vous plaît. Then I can en-prettify it, like the English version.
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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Ghorin » Tue Feb 16, 2016 6:46 am

Yes Zed, you will get the final version for the final packaging.
Have all a nice day

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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Ecorce » Fri Mar 18, 2016 12:44 pm

Looks very interesting. :)
I like that you found a way to create rules for "abstract magic". Can't imagine the impact during an adventure, but it feels pretty close from the offical rules.
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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by zedturtle » Fri Mar 18, 2016 5:06 pm

Thanks! You're right, most of the magic feels pretty subtle in play; I haven't yet seen it overwhelm the abilities of RAW characters, which was certainly a design goal (to not overwhelm, I mean).
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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Glorelendil » Sun Mar 20, 2016 4:19 am

I'll put this out there: this compilation would become a great starting template for anybody interested (Bueller? Bueller?) in creating new spell lists for Middle Earth D&D.

Just sayin'.
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Re: Zed's Magic Thread

Post by Falenthal » Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:18 am

Glorelendil wrote:I'll put this out there: this compilation would become a great starting template for anybody interested (Bueller? Bueller?) in creating new spell lists for Middle Earth D&D.

Just sayin'.
Who would be so heretic as to do that? I'd kick out of this forum anyone that even suggested something like that.

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