New Character Sheet

[Carfax]

Empoisenement is not correct cause is used for a character state ! Use " Empoisonnė"
This us the same logic for the others states terms. See my first post for my proposals.

[zedturtle]

Empoisenement is not correct cause is used for a character state ! Use " Empoisonnė"
This us the same logic for the others states terms. See my first post for my proposals.

Huh. Now I'm very confused. I did use Empoisonné, not Empoisenement. But here's a link to what seems to be an official sheet, with form fillable capabilities added: https://khomenor.files.wordpress.com/20 ... 1-2-2b.pdf

I will correct "Commençant" to "Initiale" as that was my invention. I'm not sure about the colons... you could say they're not strictly necessary in the English version either. Does it look especially strange in French?

[Carfax]

My apologies for "Empoisonné", I've make a confusion with the "Epuisement" line. I know this character sheet that I use with my players. So, finally, I propose two choices :
- Epuisé/Empoisonné/Mélancolique/Blessé (of course, that's my preference !!!)
- Epuisement/Empoisonnement/Mélancolie/Blessure

Use "Initale" is a good choice but you can write too "Valeur initiale" or "Valeur de départ".

Fellowship focus could be translated by "Lien de fraternité" or "Lien de communauté".

[zedturtle]

Okay, I'll play around with those and post a new version of the sheet. Thanks!

[Carfax]

you're welcome ! Thank's for your consideration

[zedturtle]

New French version, feedback please:

[Carfax]

Nice work Zedturtle !

Maybe just one more thing : you write any word whith a capital letter except "Communauté" of "Lien de communauté".
Something else, "Initiale" for the threshold of "Communauté" counter at the bottom of the page.

[zedturtle]

Nice work Zedturtle !

Maybe just one more thing : you write any word whith a capital letter except "Communauté" of "Lien de communauté".

Can you give me some more examples? Are you asking for more capital letters? Or less?

[Carfax]

OK, i'm so sorry, i'm not explicit !

If you use capital letter, use for all. For exemple, you write in top sheet "Niveau de Vie", "Avantage Culturel",...In this case, write too "Lien de Communauté" with a capital letter. It's just for uniformity of the sheet and, of course, it's a minor correction !!!

[zedturtle]

OK, i'm so sorry, i'm not explicit !

If you use capital letter, use for all. For exemple, you write in top sheet "Niveau de Vie", "Avantage Culturel",...In this case, write too "Lien de Communauté" with a capital letter. It's just for uniformity of the sheet and, of course, it's a minor correction !!!

All right, the link/picture above is updated. Let me know if y'all see anything else that need to change before I make the B&W and form-fillable versions.