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Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 4:25 pm
by Blubbo Baggins
I was going to ask the same thing. I love that style of art... I don't play Banner Saga, but I know about it simply because of the art... such an awesome style.

Well done!

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 4:58 pm
by zedturtle
Yeah, I'm afraid that until we have the issue of whether he had the rights to use that art, I won't be promoting that version anywhere.

But tomfish, I'd love to work with you on the final version of the adventure in French.

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 8:48 pm
by Blubbo Baggins
I could be wrong, but based on what tomfish said, it sounds like he got help directly from the artist who made it specifically for the adventure...

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2014 9:17 pm
by zedturtle
Blubbo Baggins wrote:I could be wrong, but based on what tomfish said, it sounds like he got help directly from the artist who made it specifically for the adventure...
Yeah, but other folks are saying it's lifted from the computer game The Banner Saga, so I'm hoping to hear from tomfish or MarcB.

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:29 am
by tomfish
Hi guys, did not know that, will check with the illustrator.

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 10:21 pm
by Rue
Zed, just reading through and noticed on p. 8 in the second paragraph (in italics for what the thralls are thinking), it says, "Now your Viglund, the lord of your land, has promised you freedom if you can steal the Sickle of the Full Moon from the Beornings."

I think that very first "your" should be deleted.

And I think it was already pointed out but there's a "Cedric" for "Cenric" in the first paragraph of Jarn the Wicked also on p. 8.

It was really fun to play it, and I think people will have a great time getting to know TOR using it!

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 11:28 pm
by zedturtle
Wow. Urgh. I had printed out the latest version of the adventure on oversized paper yesterday and marked up everything that I could find/that others had found. Still missed that one...

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For the Falrock, which version do people prefer? The more basic version of a campsite by some rapids or a more 'pirate's hideout' with spits of land in the river and rope bridges/ fallen logs connecting them?

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:21 pm
by tomfish
Pirate's hideout ! (that's how we played it, at least in spirit)


BTW Zed, I sent you a private message re: the translated version

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:16 pm
by zedturtle
tomfish wrote:Pirate's hideout ! (that's how we played it, at least in spirit)
Yeah, I went that way. Hopefully, you'll like my version of that...
BTW Zed, I sent you a private message re: the translated version
Hadn't got it, yet...

Re: An Introductory Adventure

Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2015 12:36 am
by zedturtle
(Link redacted due to being out of date) is a file with the first 12 pages (i.e. the actual adventure).

If anyone has any free time, I'd love to have people take a look at it. I'm sure that there's more typos, and I've changed the Falrock scene quite a bit.