That's excellent.Glorelendil wrote:I like your backgrounds. If you're concerned about word counts I can work on paring, without (I hope) losing meaning. I'll use this one as an example:zedturtle wrote:Iwald of Mountain Hall (The Fosterling)
Specialties: Beast-lore, Enemy-Lore (Orcs), Leechcraft
Distinctive Features: Bold, Generous
Iwald was found as an abandoned infant at the edge of the Wolfswood. Hartnid, hunter of Mountain Hall, took the child in and raised him as his own. Despite this, many of Mountain Hall call Iwald 'the Fosterling'. Hartnid has taught Iwald the Great Bow and the Long-hafted Axe and calls him son. But still, as Iwald sits by the fire in the Great Hall, he dreams of songs made for him and winning his own name from those who have raised him.
When the call came to attend the Festival and Iwald learned that Beorn might be present and that a great honour could be won by participation in the Trials, he resolved to take part.
Iwald knows Biarnor, Dhuoda and Roderic from his travels.
Originally played by cuthalion in the play-test, Iwald's backstory needed a bit of editing for size... I also tried to play-down the inherent tragedy in his background, as it's unlikely to come up in a con game.
Iwald, 'the Fosterling', was found as an infant abandoned at the edge of the Wolfswood. Hartnid, hunter of Mountain Hall, raised him as his own, teaching him woodcraft and warfare and calling him son. But as Iwald sits by the fire in the Great Hall he dreams of earning his own name from those who have raised him, and hearing it sung in tales. When Iwald learns that Beorn might be present at the festival, and that great honour can be won in the Trials, he resolves to take part.
Now I'll try to do something with the Dwarf... I guess.