Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by Rocmistro » Thu Aug 20, 2015 6:36 pm

Stormcrow wrote:
Here's everything we know about what the balrog looked like:
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And why did you omit the obvious and essential piece of data which any logical, naturally reading human being would agree plays a major part in describing the Balrog?

""It stepped forward slowly on to the bridge, and suddenly it drew itself up to a great height, and its wings were spread from wall to wall..."
Stormcrow wrote: You must miss out on a lot of meaning, then. Anyway I HAVE shown you that; you just don't accept it.
See, now why did you have to go there and suggest I miss out on a lot of meaning? I'm pretty, savvy, thanks very much. I think things should be taken at face value until or unless some cue suggests to me otherwise. In real life there are plenty of such cues. I could turn this around and say "how do you function in society when everything becomes a metaphor?" but I won't.

But the whole point is that you have not shown your argument. There are a couple paragraphs in between the simile of "...like great wings" and the literal narrative "..wings were spread from wall to wall". I still don't understand why the no-wing camp hones in on that specific part to support its argument, and plays inheritance leapfrog with the application of the simile. What's being done is not a careful reading: it's Lawyering.

-do you look for metaphor or alternate meaning in any of the other words of that sentence? Step or bridge, 'drew' or walls? No; every other part of that sentence can be taken literally and without looking for double meaning, but because Tolkien used the word "wings" therein and also used the word "wings" several paragraphs earlier in constructing a simile, then the conclusion must be that this was also a literary device? Can you not see how that logic would twist the entire 800 page story into a meaningless black hole of amputated literary devices if we applied it universally? I guess this is really the crux of my disbelief and question: How and when does the 'no-wing camp' choose to decide when something is a metaphor/simile/analaogy, etc. rather than to be taken literally?
But that's exactly what metaphor is: use of one word to mean another without making it an explicit comparison. As soon as you have a "trigger," it's a simile, not a metaphor.
To be successful, though metaphor requires exaggeration in order to self-identify as such. "All the world's a stage" is obvious metaphor. If it's not clear that your statement is metaphor, you haven't done your job as an author. Since Tolkien was no amateur writer or academic concerning language, I have to believe he knew this. One could make an appearl to the subtlety of metaphor, here, I suppose, but its just as likely that the statement was meant as literal. Given the preponderance of other cues that Tolkien gives us regarding Balrogs, both in his literature and by understanding his faith and what Balrogs were meant to symbolize in his mythology, one begins to see a very obvious picture regarding wings, (if not flight).
You said this twice. I am completely unaware of any such suggestions. Care to quote some?
“Swiftly they arose, and they passed with winged speed over Hithlum…" (what kind of speed, you ask? Winged speed. Why? Because they had wings. Again, I'm not saying this is THE Correct interpretation...but it is the most natural and obvious one. And what did they do with that winged speed? They passed over Hithlum. Passed over...Again, the allusion to the Hebrew holiday is not missed here; passing over kind of suggestive of God's angels or spirit "flying over" the righteous Jewish houses so as to not slay the firstborn.

"Thus [the dwarves] roused from sleep a thing of terror that, flying from Thangorodrim, had lain hidden at the foundations of the earth since the coming of the Host of the West: a Balrog of Morgoth." Is it possible that the Balrog "flew from Thangorodrim" in the same way that Gandalf told the Fellowship "Fly [you fools]!" Yes, very possible. When taken in context with everything else, you cannot deny there is a constant direct or indirect reference to flight and wings when it comes to Balrogs. This could be purely happenstance on the part of the Professor, or we could just submit to reading it with the most natural, obvious, and simple form of interpretation.
The balrog is not made of shadow; it is surrounded by it. Its man-like (maybe) form is visible inside the shadow.
...the "balrogs have wings" argument is about the balrog having physical, actual wings.
I disagree; it's about the Balrog having a form, to include appendages, homo-corporeal with the rest of its form, whatever "stuff" that form happens to be made of. In other words, IF the Balrog was made of shadow and flame, and it's wings were thus shown to be made of shadow and/or flame, would you then declare that the Balrog did not have wings because they weren't made of physical flesh and bone and sinew? Given your own bullets above, regarding the description of the Balrog, you even indicate it is "predominantly shadow"...formed into the shape of a man perhaps, but mostly shadow.
A close, careful reading is not over-scrutinizing.
Well in my opinion that's not what's being done. Rather, looking for strained metaphors and similies in several-paragraphs-removed antecedents in order to subvert the most natural, obvious, and simple reading of the text in order to draw strained conclusions.

My suspicion is that this done as a form of academic circumcision; it's a self-imposed mark, meant to separate the true Tolkien-philes from the ignorant mass-consumers so that they have a badge of esoteric honor. A secret hand-shake if you will, by which to identify those they think truly worthy of having an opinion on Tolkien.
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by zedturtle » Thu Aug 20, 2015 6:38 pm

To invoke my fish metaphor* from the other thread, perhaps the most generous interpretation would be that some balrogs are capable of having (or generating) wings (quite possibly of shadow). There then might be balrogs without wings and balrogs with wings and it's up to each person/group to use what they feel is what they want out of the ambiguous source material. And, as GE pointed out, wings do not mean flight.

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* see what I did there? :)
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by Glorelendil » Thu Aug 20, 2015 6:56 pm

"Fly, you fools!" was literal. Nowhere does it say that Dwarves can't fly.
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by zedturtle » Thu Aug 20, 2015 7:01 pm

Glorelendil wrote:"Fly, you fools!" was literal. Nowhere does it say that Dwarves can't fly.
Nah. There was a "It can..." in front of Gandalf's statement that was lost in a a tragic editing error. Or maybe it was "It can't", I don't remember.
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by zedturtle » Thu Aug 20, 2015 7:05 pm

And Rocco, in in personal answer to your implied question, you could find instances from back in the day of me absolutely insisting that Balrogs must have wings. I am less certain these days as to the nature of the wings or their existence as more than the mere artifice or metaphor. I was only pointing out that if they do have a literal wings, then we don't have any instances of them being shown to fly, and a couple of instances where they are shown to fall.
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by Rocmistro » Thu Aug 20, 2015 7:21 pm

It doesn't bug me that Balrogs do or don't have wings.

It doesn't bug me that Balrogs can or can't fly.

I'm not married to any of those ideas or expressions of fantasy demons.

What bugs me is that, for the longest time, flying/winged Balrogs was a pretty sound and reasonable reading/intrepretation of the Lord of the Rings. The world got along just fine. Invented cell phones and ended the Cold War without nukes going off.

And then someone in the 90's decided they had to find a way to be all esoteric and cool, and launched the no-wing theory, and the adherents to it tend to be extremely pedantic and condescending "Well....obviously, you don't understand what simile is, so let me link the defintion for you, smug-har!"

Back to the original thread...of all the the bad Peter Jackson conceptions...there are so many things he screwed up. I just don't think, given the ambiguity and raging-on of the wings argument, that it should make the list, let alone be at the top.
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by Stormcrow » Thu Aug 20, 2015 7:52 pm

Rocmistro wrote:And why did you omit the obvious and essential piece of data which any logical, naturally reading human being would agree plays a major part in describing the Balrog?
"Any logical, naturally reading human being." Oh, please. This is a novel, not a police report.
I think things should be taken at face value until or unless some cue suggests to me otherwise. In real life there are plenty of such cues.
Novel!

In a novel, or poetry, or saga, or just about any other work of fiction worth reading, a metaphor can stand alone. The author assumes his readership understands how metaphors work. Tolkien clearly overestimated his audience in this case.
I could turn this around and say "how do you function in society when everything becomes a metaphor?" but I won't.
Oh, thank you! Thank you! Thank you for your mercy!
But the whole point is that you have not shown your argument. There are a couple paragraphs in between the simile of "...like great wings" and the literal narrative "..wings were spread from wall to wall".
So? What difference does it make if there A paragraph between the simile and the metaphor? The shadow was growing throughout the entire scene.
I still don't understand why the no-wing camp hones in on that specific part to support its argument, and plays inheritance leapfrog with the application of the simile.
Because that's what's happening?
What's being done is not a careful reading: it's Lawyering.
I don't even know what this means.
-do you look for metaphor or alternate meaning in any of the other words of that sentence?
I am sophisticated enough to understand when Tolkien is using a metaphor and when he is not.
Step or bridge, 'drew' or walls? No; every other part of that sentence can be taken literally and without looking for double meaning, but because Tolkien used the word "wings" therein and also used the word "wings" several paragraphs earlier in constructing a simile, then the conclusion must be that this was also a literary device? Can you not see how that logic would twist the entire 800 page story into a meaningless black hole of amputated literary devices if we applied it universally?
Yes, O Master of Hyperbole.
I guess this is really the crux of my disbelief and question: How and when does the 'no-wing camp' choose to decide when something is a metaphor/simile/analaogy, etc. rather than to be taken literally?
Because when something is LIKE a thing, it is NOT that thing.
But that's exactly what metaphor is: use of one word to mean another without making it an explicit comparison. As soon as you have a "trigger," it's a simile, not a metaphor.
To be successful, though metaphor requires exaggeration in order to self-identify as such.
Ummm... no it doesn't. It does require a way for you to distinguish between the literal truth and a rhetorical effect. In this case that mechanism is the previous simile.
If it's not clear that your statement is metaphor, you haven't done your job as an author. Since Tolkien was no amateur writer or academic concerning language, I have to believe he knew this.
It's clear to me. Guess he did his job as an author. That it's not clear to you is not his fault.
“Swiftly they arose, and they passed with winged speed over Hithlum…" (what kind of speed, you ask? Winged speed. Why? Because they had wings. Again, I'm not saying this is THE Correct interpretation...but it is the most natural and obvious one.
I'd say the archaic and poetic interpretation of "very fast," which matches the archaic and poetic register of the passage, is the more natural and obvious one.
And what did they do with that winged speed? They passed over Hithlum. Passed over...Again, the allusion to the Hebrew holiday is not missed here; passing over kind of suggestive of God's angels or spirit "flying over" the righteous Jewish houses so as to not slay the firstborn.
Dude, everyone "passes over" mountains in Tolkien. It means they crossed them.

Methinks you are attributing too much religious allusion to Tolkien. He wrote an essentially Catholic story, but he didn't use religious rhetorical devices all over the place.
"Thus [the dwarves] roused from sleep a thing of terror that, flying from Thangorodrim, had lain hidden at the foundations of the earth since the coming of the Host of the West: a Balrog of Morgoth." Is it possible that the Balrog "flew from Thangorodrim" in the same way that Gandalf told the Fellowship "Fly [you fools]!" Yes, very possible.
Yes, like, so possible it is the only reasonable meaning. Tolkien uses the archaic "fly," meaning "flee," all over the place. Its use has nothing to do with being airborne.
When taken in context with everything else, you cannot deny there is a constant direct or indirect reference to flight and wings when it comes to Balrogs.
No more reference than for anyone else, in that a lot of archaic English idioms referred to flight to mean moving quickly or fleeing. Prove to me that balrogs get disproportionately MORE references than anyone else.
This could be purely happenstance on the part of the Professor, or we could just submit to reading it with the most natural, obvious, and simple form of interpretation.
For "natural, obvious, and simple," read "modern and simplistic." Tolkien was using more archaic language in his stories than we use, or indeed than he himself used in normal conversation. "Fly" means "flee." "Pass over" means "get from one side to another." "Winged speed" means "very fast." Tolkien often enters this register when things get exciting or grandiose. He expected his readers to understand archaic language.
I disagree; it's about the Balrog having a form, to include appendages, homo-corporeal with the rest of its form, whatever "stuff" that form happens to be made of. In other words, IF the Balrog was made of shadow and flame, and it's wings were thus shown to be made of shadow and/or flame, would you then declare that the Balrog did not have wings because they weren't made of physical flesh and bone and sinew? Given your own bullets above, regarding the description of the Balrog, you even indicate it is "predominantly shadow"...formed into the shape of a man perhaps, but mostly shadow.
I won't even dignify this with a response.
A close, careful reading is not over-scrutinizing.
Well in my opinion that's not what's being done. Rather, looking for strained metaphors and similies in several-paragraphs-removed antecedents in order to subvert the most natural, obvious, and simple reading of the text in order to draw strained conclusions.
This "most natural, obvious, and simple reading" thing is just in your head. As far as I'm concerned, saying "shadow like wings" as a simile and then "wings reached from wall to wall" as a metaphor is natural, obvious, and simple.
My suspicion is that this done as a form of academic circumcision; it's a self-imposed mark, meant to separate the true Tolkien-philes from the ignorant mass-consumers so that they have a badge of esoteric honor. A secret hand-shake if you will, by which to identify those they think truly worthy of having an opinion on Tolkien.
Take off the tinfoil hat. Balrogs aren't described as having wings, and it just irks me when people get it wrong, just like all the times you used "it's" instead of "its" in your post.

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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by zedturtle » Thu Aug 20, 2015 8:18 pm

I would like to remind everyone that any one of these threads might be the first thing a brand new fan of the game reads. That's not to say that we can't disagree or dive into minutiae, but we might want to make sure that we make an effort to respect everyone and the varying ways the game and the source text can be approached.
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by Mytholder » Thu Aug 20, 2015 8:35 pm

Given that "do Balrogs have wings" has been argued since the dawn of time, or at least since the dawn of the internet, let's not rehash it. Here's the alt.fan.tolkien FAQ *ESSAY* on the topic.

http://tolkien.slimy.com/essays/TAB6.html
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Re: Help me get Jackson's imagery out of my head

Post by Majestic » Thu Aug 20, 2015 8:47 pm

Guys, if the Tolkien Society can't decide and being that the Professor is no longer living, this is an issue that neither side is really going to "prove".

Personally, I'm not solidly in either camp; I'm of the opinion that any given person/LM should do what they thinks makes more sense to them, in their game or world.

Being as this has been hashed out by many people for years, you could each save yourself a lot of typing and read the same arguments
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