Typo for Bree
Re: Typo for Bree
Page 94, right column, eight line from the top
"Epilogue – A Harvest Moon
The company consider their adventurers"...
Maybe it's "The company consider their adventures"
"Epilogue – A Harvest Moon
The company consider their adventurers"...
Maybe it's "The company consider their adventures"
Re: Typo for Bree
Page 37, second bullet point, last line:
Should be 'send' instead
might sent their own messenger or agent instead.
Should be 'send' instead
might sent their own messenger or agent instead.
Re: Typo for Bree
p.65
In "Climbing out of the Barrow", line 4, "Athletics" lacks the bold.
In "Jumping of Falling into the Barrows", line 3, "Athletics" lacks the bold.
In "Climbing out of the Barrow", line 4, "Athletics" lacks the bold.
In "Jumping of Falling into the Barrows", line 3, "Athletics" lacks the bold.
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Re: Typo for Bree
Page 4, column 1, last paragraph:
Should be: "containing descriptions about the principal locations...", not principle.
column 2, Strange Men, Strange Roads:
Should be: "The company sets out...", not set.
Page 5, column 2:
Should be: "Once your company has vanquished Gorlanc", not have.
Should be: "containing descriptions about the principal locations...", not principle.
column 2, Strange Men, Strange Roads:
Should be: "The company sets out...", not set.
Page 5, column 2:
Should be: "Once your company has vanquished Gorlanc", not have.
"Far, far below the deepest delvings of the Dwarves, the world is gnawed by nameless things. Even Sauron knows them not. They are older than he."
Re: Typo for Bree
"Have" instead of "has" reflects the typical British English way of conjugating for group nouns.
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Re: Typo for Bree
British English is strange (not that American English doesn't have its own quirks).
You foulks are also uncoummounly in louve with 'ou'.
You foulks are also uncoummounly in louve with 'ou'.
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"Far, far below the deepest delvings of the Dwarves, the world is gnawed by nameless things. Even Sauron knows them not. They are older than he."
Re: Typo for Bree
p.71
Between the third and fourth bulletpoint, a separation space is missing.
Again, not a typo, but...
p. 68, last paragraph of the first column:
"Should anyone try to eavesdrop on the Dwarves, they switch to their own strange tongue,..."
Wasn't Khûzdul a secret language, that dwarves did never speak in public? I guess the Dwarves will stop talking, but never talk Khûzdul with non-dwarves hearing them.
Between the third and fourth bulletpoint, a separation space is missing.
Again, not a typo, but...
p. 68, last paragraph of the first column:
"Should anyone try to eavesdrop on the Dwarves, they switch to their own strange tongue,..."
Wasn't Khûzdul a secret language, that dwarves did never speak in public? I guess the Dwarves will stop talking, but never talk Khûzdul with non-dwarves hearing them.
Re: Typo for Bree
p.75
second column, under Secrets, first sentence:
"Awe" and "Inspire" lack the bold.
p.76
first column, under Digging Deeper, first sentence:
"If a companion eavesdrop by night), they hear..." the closing bracket is unnecessary.
p.77
first column, under Digging Deeper, first sentence:
"Healing" lacks the bold.
p.78
first column, under Digging Deeper, first sentence:
"Insight" lacks the bold.
p.80
First column, in the Weapons box, under the weapons stats:
"Gorlanc's Poison" lacks the bold.
second column, under Secrets, first sentence:
"Awe" and "Inspire" lack the bold.
p.76
first column, under Digging Deeper, first sentence:
"If a companion eavesdrop by night), they hear..." the closing bracket is unnecessary.
p.77
first column, under Digging Deeper, first sentence:
"Healing" lacks the bold.
p.78
first column, under Digging Deeper, first sentence:
"Insight" lacks the bold.
p.80
First column, in the Weapons box, under the weapons stats:
"Gorlanc's Poison" lacks the bold.
Re: Typo for Bree
British are strange in their own way, but it's a"good" strangeness.
Nothing of Worth.
Re: Typo for Bree
p.83
Box for the White Wolf of the North:
Under Special Abilities, Fear of Fire is (wrongly) underlined.
Maybe the attack, Bite, should be underlined?
p.85
Under Evalutaing the Outcome of the Encounter:
The second and third results range 2-4 and 4-6. Of course, both ranges can't have 4 included.
As the result 7+ says "As 2-3, but...", I guess the second range of results is 2-3 and the third, 4-6, is correct.
Box for the White Wolf of the North:
Under Special Abilities, Fear of Fire is (wrongly) underlined.
Maybe the attack, Bite, should be underlined?
p.85
Under Evalutaing the Outcome of the Encounter:
The second and third results range 2-4 and 4-6. Of course, both ranges can't have 4 included.
As the result 7+ says "As 2-3, but...", I guess the second range of results is 2-3 and the third, 4-6, is correct.
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