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Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:55 pm
by Terisonen
When I read this kind of topic, I was inevitably thinking of a pack of predator ripping a fresh newborn alive
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2017 2:11 pm
by Kirppu
Terisonen wrote: ↑Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:55 pm
When I read this kind of topic, I was inevitabely thinking of a pack of predator ripping a fresh newborn alive
Yeah thats why I was really careful in the initial post, its definitely intended as help!!
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2017 2:46 pm
by Otaku-sempai
Terisonen wrote: ↑Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:55 pm
When I read this kind of topic, I was inevitabely thinking of a pack of predator ripping a fresh newborn alive
But it's being done with love!
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2017 2:50 pm
by Kirppu
Otaku-sempai wrote: ↑Thu Jun 29, 2017 2:46 pm
Terisonen wrote: ↑Thu Jun 29, 2017 1:55 pm
When I read this kind of topic, I was inevitabely thinking of a pack of predator ripping a fresh newborn alive
But it's being done with love!
Haha exactly
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2017 10:09 pm
by Falenthal
p.103
Second column, under "The Dogs", 4th line:
"Awe" lacks the bold.
5th line:
"Beast-lore" lacks the italic.
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2017 6:00 am
by Falenthal
P.9
Under The East Road, second line
'Greeenway' has three 'e'.
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2017 1:44 pm
by Earendil
Not a typo, but an oddity: on p29, the possible guests at the Prancing Pony include "Dwarves from the Misty Mountains, going West". Surely there are no Dwarves from the Misty Mountains at this time?
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2017 1:46 pm
by Otaku-sempai
Earendil wrote: ↑Fri Jun 30, 2017 1:44 pm
Not a typo, but an oddity: on p29, the possible guests at the Prancing Pony include "Dwarves from the Misty Mountains, going West". Surely there are no Dwarves from the Misty Mountains at this time?
Maybe that should be read as "Dwarves from beyond the Misty Mountains (Erebor, the Iron Hills or the Grey Mountains)".
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2017 1:49 pm
by Rich H
Earendil wrote: ↑Fri Jun 30, 2017 1:44 pm
Not a typo, but an oddity: on p29, the possible guests at the Prancing Pony include "Dwarves from the Misty Mountains, going West". Surely there are no Dwarves from the Misty Mountains at this time?
I took that as simply meaning they had crossed into Eriador from the Misty Mountains but came from further afield.
Re: Typo for Bree
Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2017 3:21 pm
by Jon Hodgson
Thanks all! Dropping a post into mark where we're up to with implementing changes. A new version will be uploaded soon - 90% of comments have been used, but not all - I've checked them all out, but I don't want to spend time doing feedback on feedback on feedback, when I can just crack on with Oaths.
All your efforts are greatly appreciated.
Actually, it's worth mentioning on Bree I tried an experiment in proofing, and it didn't work out this time - it's taken us to the bad old days, and pretty much highlighted we were on the right track with the last supplement. Cool. Lesson learned.
Thanks again!