I just skimmed through the Hall, but I have to say:
- great design and layout! Really good and inline with official material... (as did many other fan-based materials in their own ways)
- what an ambitioned adventure! You really understated the adventure, because it is neither "mini" in amount of text, nor in theme..!
An impressive first issue and I look forward to the following ones, if you keep up that quality.
So much for now (late at night).
Edit in the light of day:
I was very surprised about the amount of art in the webzine, but of course I did not know, that you did not have any permissions... (altough I wondered if/how you got permission to use that much, from different sources).
The design used by you was not an absolute copy (although it reads like this, somewhere below). And there are serveral fan made materials in this forum, using at least something as similar to the official desing as your design was. So I thought about that, but my opinion stands: It was a good design.
From my personal expierence: I produced serval RPG-books for private use. Of course in those is much art and some texts, I never got permission to use (not even tried to get), because I knew it would and could not have been given by the owners.
So I can use those "beautiful" versions of the books only for myself and my real-life RPG-groups. But I created versions without those not permitted parts and art, which can be used and spread by anybody...
Are they looking as great, as the personal ones I use myself? Definitly not!
Are they useless because of that? Absolutely not!
So what I am trying to say is: If you can not produce a webzine with so much art, as you would like, this is not that bad. Almost noboby, not even Cubicle7 can produce that much art for their books, as they would like to use (because it is always costly in one way or the other and a professional book created to be sold is a calculated product...)..!
So just get used to the concept, of more text and less art. Try to find art, that is allowed for public use (for exsample old paintings wich belong to all mankind, now), and if you do not find that much, use less. Your webzine will not suffer from that on the long run. At least not, if the texts are good