An Introductory Adventure

[zedturtle]

New Version!

The first four pages of the amended/corrected version.









More to come tomorrowish... got loads yet to do in order to get it done. Unfortunately, we're down to mostly text, but the next page will have the map.

[Blubbo Baggins]

If you mean "publish" it by releasing it on the intarwebs to roam free; they may or may not be able be able to respond to it... doing so may violate the terms of their license.

Publish - I meant, simply putting up the adventure for people to download. I certainly didn't expect anyone to create fan content and charge for it.

It looks great. You probably knew this, but for the Torbald Encounter you still had the Success table for Ethal.

[zedturtle]

Oops, got distracted by the five year old at about that time... It shall be fixed.

[Pangea]

Oops, got distracted by the five year old at about that time... It shall be fixed.

"Fixing" a five year old brings Shadow Points for sure. Please reconsider.

[zedturtle]

Oops, got distracted by the five year old at about that time... It shall be fixed.

"Fixing" a five year old brings Shadow Points for sure. Please reconsider.

The error has been fixed. The five year old is unharmed.





Falenthal, I was trying to find room in there to fit your name in the chase section, since your ideas contributed as much as the TW stuff... If you'd like, I will revisit and try to scrunch a line so that I can attribute you there.

I did have to pare down even more, just for space and simplicity. I tried to give pursuing characters a meaningful choice.

[Falenthal]

Falenthal, I was trying to find room in there to fit your name in the chase section, since your ideas contributed as much as the TW stuff... If you'd like, I will revisit and try to scrunch a line so that I can attribute you there.

I did have to pare down even more, just for space and simplicity. I tried to give pursuing characters a meaningful choice.

Uau! Thanks for the good intentions, Zed!
I just think that the creator of something always drinks from different fountains, but the product is his. As honored as I would be to be mentioned in the document, don't change things for me. This is your adventure, you freely asked for help and I (and others) freely gave it.

And don't be too harsh on your 5 year old...

[zedturtle]

The missing page. Now only the last one (Denouement and Rewards) needs to be done.

(Not Shown - The corrections on previous pages, thanks to all who caught them!)

P.S. There have been multiple requests for the "template" that I use... it's a self-made thing using the Adobe Creative Suite products. I'm planning on releasing this file (the Sickle Adventure) as a template, with some things removed... i.e. things that I might be able to use on this project, but that I don't have the rights to give away for reuse.

[Glorelendil]

You're killing me every time you bump this thread. I want to read it so badly...

[Rich H]

This looks really cool, Zed, when's the ETA for the finished pdf? Looking forward to reading it in it's entirety.

[zedturtle]

This looks really cool, Zed, when's the ETA for the finished pdf? Looking forward to reading it in it's entirety.

I'm struggling through the last page right now... endings are hard.

I keep distracting myself... laundry, feeding kids, watching television...